DJRaveR's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[K-Dm - Never Again (RE)]

Great

I like this, would be great for a flash but maybe not for people to listen to for fun, like dance. This is greta work and should keep going with this. The start wasn't bad, could have used something else and the ending just ends abrutly, but I don't really mind.

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K-Dm responds:

thx for the review.

Ill check ur stuff when i get the chance.

[High Way (DEMO)]

OK

The start, plain and boring, needs something else. The snare at the start for the build-up needs to be fixed, but the one in the middle of the song is good as it gives it a scratchy style :P.

The melody in the middle should change, kinda like the scratch, but something different. It feels a little lifeless but that could be changed with something (dunno what) and it just ends abrubtly, which of course you will fix, but around there you should come in with a silence or something and maybe try some piano work or something with a little build up.

Well thats all for now. Come check out my stuff and tell me what you think.

Deefour responds:

Thanks for that, come back next week/month and you mite see the full version your ideas have helped me alot.. i basicly just got bored of making this and had no ideas on what to put in, i planned on adding a piano just dunno what kind i tried all.. mite go look for some more.

Bu sure ill go and have a look at your music =)

- D4

[Violent Breathing (downto]

nb

Not bad, could be better, I ahevn't hear dthe original or anything but this sounds pretty good for a song off by heart then made with a program. Should make your own though, would be way better.

This also seems repeatitve and is kinda getting on my nerves, make it a little more random next time.

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DarkValentine responds:

well, there realy has'nt been a good version of violent Breathing. And the original was a faster version of it.

The original version of Violent Breathing also was a bit on the repetitive side, and i tried doing it differently before this one.

sadly it did'nt come out like i wanted. i'll try another version soon down the line though.

[Damage Control]

Nearly

This is really good, but a few inconsistancys there, it's not very original yet I love it for what it is. I would have put this in video game music cause most of it is in a way. I'm going to download this (I hardly ever download things) because its good for what kind of electronica is.

Keep up the great work, your getting a 5 from me. :P

Check out my stuff... if you have the time, you'll be busy with this one.

pyroguy-37 responds:

Thanks I will keep that in mind for my future uploads! Great review! Always a plus for constructiveness..:P

[DJ DaVinster & ChiRon- Eclipse]

Finished?

This seems a little empty, but otherwise its well done, it seems a little of tune but other than that I think its awesome. What was great was how you went from soft and simple to music to a more hardcore feel with the melodys. Keep this great work.

5/5 Check out my stuff :P

DJ-DaVinster responds:

Yeah, I think this isn't done. There MAY be a second extended version, but other than that I loved it too...

I'll try & check your stuff soon.

[Flashburn - Enigma]

Awesome

After that beautiful master piece I am honored that you reviewed my audio. The pan was the best, should try and do a fade out with each ear or something, anyway, keep up the awesome work. There was a part at the end where the bass fuzzed, make sure it don't happen in future projects.

Flashburn responds:

haha thanks, ya im gonna have to watch some of the EQ issues

[CjienX - Drifting in Space]

Love it

This is sounds good, but the cut from the guitars were strange. The drums came in at the right time. Oh, and love the techno stuff inserted in there, gives it a nice spacy feel.

Its not something I would listen to everyday but it is great to listen to, love the pan's.

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CjienX responds:

Thanks man, im making new music and posting it soon, and im gonna check out ur stuff right now.

[Vicious Reaction To A Soothing]

2 words

"I'm gunna say two words and walk away..." "... Fucking Lame"

Biosect responds:

you really prooved a point there

[Introduction, Rondo et Scherzo]

More Instrument

The more the merrier, a violin and a trumpet, dunno. Didn't sound like background music for a flash, but someone actually playing it which is awesome.

Great replay value I assure. Stick to this day job.

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MusicalRocky responds:

Hey. Lol sorry to tell you, but I just couldn't add more instruments to this piece; it would ruin the feelings I'm trying to convey. That's cool that it sounded like someone really performing it; I tried to help that effect with the dynamics and tempos.

I do intend to stick to writing music.

Thanks for the review man.

[Familiar Blanket of Snow]

snow me

It sounds like a snow scene, but really sounds like something off runescape, lol. You got real talent man. Im giving this a 5 and a waffle cause I want breakfast at midnight :P.

I think if you slowed this down a little and gave it more oumpf you could make it more triumphant and make it seem like a batlte has won.

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MusicalRocky responds:

Lol thanks. But, like, what do you mean, winning a battle? This is kids sledding haha. Maybe they feel special cuz they made it down the hill safely? THanks for your review man. I appreciate it. I made it fast because the kids are excited.