DJRaveR's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[CjienX - Raid in the Sea]

Don't think he is tripping

I hear some kinda voice or something, I think its just the background music though, just sounds like a chicks voice going yeah. Anyway, sounds decent, I just don't think its good enough, work with your stuff more and keep going.

CjienX responds:

Hmm, i can see what you might think the voice is but its not really a voice, its a high pitched synth in the background... but this was a song i made at school when i couldn't really hear it so its not very good, ill be posting some of my really good classic songs from my first album soon tho.

[Super Nova - Lost]

Not Bad

You could do better, this ain't bad, keep the drum stuff going and make your music more user friendly :P.

I don't have any real comments cause I can't think of any atm. Keep up the work.

CjienX responds:

ya i was just trying to mix up the drums a bit and make it sound like a mush of music and drums, ty for the comment.

[Juno InnerCore]

GREAT

This is great, good job, its a bit random, needs a little flow and keep on track, with some more fades and stuff and it would have been awesome. Sounds like a mix or something, which is still just as good.

Keep at the work and make more like this, with a bit more flow.

CjienX responds:

thanks for the comment, ill edit it up a bit and maybe post a new version. ^^

[Chrome Wire]

To Bad

I liked it, but it was a little to random, I think this would be great for some great flash work. Sounds like some music outta this anime I've been watching, its good. It jumps to much though, thats the problem man. Keep up the good work and keep working on that clarity.

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Paulie-Wallie responds:

alrighty

[Retreat]

Sweet

I liked what you were doing, bit short and a bit random, and the start, well I was hoping for that fade to such come back up and own the track :P. You gotta watch for the combining of stuff. Good job man, this is awesome, this deserves some recognition. I love the bg bass, its awesome. You have to make more, don't give up, this is just the tip of the ice berg, and it looks like you've already carved it down to an ice cube.

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Paulie-Wallie responds:

=]

[Waves of Ambience]

AWESOME

This is awesome, I love it, the ending though I didn't really like, but for the start of a flash movie, this would totally be it. Im giving you a five, and a download (for future things). I would love to see an extended mix, and maybe some lyrixs or something.

Great work, check out my stuff.

Paulie-Wallie responds:

Thanks, I actually made this a while ago and heard it recently and agree with what you're saying. It could use some lyrics, the ending is kinda boring, and I should of made it longer. Thanks for the review though :)

[Hey DJ!]

HEY DJ!

The start was awesome, where it slows down just after it take to long, but still, the climb after it is just as good as the start. The music is so DJish that its awesome. Actually I can't see why I wouldn't give this a 5 and a download. I recomend this to any NGer who loves their techno and wants a dance mix in their flash product.

Anyway, keep up this awesome work and swing by my audios.

Flashgigant responds:

thank you very much for this review. i really need all your opinion :)

flashgigant

[Dj Chris -Sound 4 the future-]

Disapointing

I am disappointed, you do not follow up with a horrible track like this once you have just got all the attention of your fans... that you have just made.

Keep working on your audios, and make sure they are good the next time you post them.

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MEXPERTBOUND responds:

yah i know -_- but i try fl studio demo version and i new 4 this. next time i make good sound ;)

[DjBratwurst - FeelBetter!]

TO MUCH

There is to much going on, should have borken it down into more parts. I noticed its nearly 4mb, but you could have just had a part one and two.

Also use your drubs, like some kicks and claps and snares. I think I notice a kick, or is it a bass, can't tell really.

Try not to have to many things at once, just work what you think will work together with out making it sound so... distored.

For example, check out my stuff.

WoolyWatamelon responds:

dude, as i said, this is just a clean version of an older song. it's not really supposed to be that great in the first place, but i do hear you on the usage of drums. This song was definitely lacking in that category.

[Fast and Trippin]

Good

This is good, just well, it doesn't really stand out or anything. It'd be good for a flash but I dunno about anything else. Its original I'll give you that.

Come check out my stuff, you'll know what I mean.

DJMiddleMan responds:

thanks man