DJRaveR's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nothing In Return]

Keep trying

Not bad, keep up the good work, make more like this.

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PaulyBFromDa303 responds:

Will do man. lol

[One Tear [Legend] (Fixed)]

All My Votes belong to this

When it fades out to that lasery kick is the only really the only bad side, needed something else, like sound effects, or some fade things, but other than that, awesome.

Keep up the awesome work and hit me back.

CjienX responds:

:D iight ill hit ya back.

[In The Clouds [Legend]]

decently good

I like it, but not something I would listen to day to day. If you want to make a proper song you have to be more general, a little less ambient, but this sounds really good in some parts and I could listen to this all day, just not something I'd want to listen to all day.

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CjienX responds:

thanks, i see what you mean, i probably should have added a bit more drums.

[Fall~Away]

Awesome

This is great, I love it, nice and soft and relaxing, this is one of your best audios I'd say, I'm gunna vote 5 cause its so good (wish I could make audios like this) you got talent, keep up the great work.

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Sylacone responds:

Thanks man, and ill definatly check your stuff out. i cant go right now cus im a lil busy so, yeah. thanks for the review.

[Coke to My Nose]

The coke :(

I love coke, but in your nose, no thanks, oh and the music was really good, but the singing itself was a little retarded, something else would have been better.

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Sylacone responds:

It wasnt really singing, but it was just my friend saying coke to my nose over and over again. Glad you liked it tho.

[OutcastRaven (Short)]

HARDCORE

Off tune, other than that its awesome, the melody was a little annoying as well, need to clean it up. I hope your audios are better then this :P.

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Sylacone responds:

Hmm, ok. I'll do whatever i can to this song since it seems to be getting me a bit of publicity. So thanks for telling me its off a bit.

[Bounty Hunter]

Kinda sucked

Umm, this really sucked, but then again it was good for other things, but not my style at all.

Ahh well, thats just my opinion, keep up the work.

trekopep responds:

Yeah... it was supposed to be a video game sounding song. I only worked on it for an hour or so though. From now on I think I'll spend a little more time on my songs. But thanks for the review anyways. ;)

[Delimitation]

lol

Freestyling, lol, maybe if you had some actually music it would sound really good. Well this is good, its very original and the ending sounded like a mario thing :P. Keep up this awesome work.

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trekopep responds:

Thanks DJRaveR. Wow. You gave this a higher score than Bounty Hunter? lol. I'll check out your stuff for sure. Thanks for the review. ;)

[Without a Doubt]

Nice

I think this is pretty good, you should get a melody in it and some nice kicks. Your songs would be sweet to remix and maybe use for background music. Keep up the awesome work.

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trekopep responds:

7,8,9. It's a pattern. Except that it actually went 8,7,9. Either way. Thanks again for your review DJRaveR. I've just started making songs pretty recently. With luck, I'll get better. I'm gonna take Da-Chibi's advise and use a friggin metronome. I'm going to use more drums and stuff in my next song. So far, my songs don't really get into a beat. It's all instronments. How the heck do you spell instronments. Why the heck don't I know. Why don't I just look at m-w. Why am I asking you all these questions. Well, thanks for the review. See u later. ;)