DJRaveR's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Techno Paradise]

Do Better

I reckon you could do better, this seems annoying but well organized which is a plus. I think you should focus on 1 melody and build from that, some parts are good for melodys yet just focus on 1 and interchange from them.

Anyway, swing by my page :P

[High Way (DEMO)]

OK

The start, plain and boring, needs something else. The snare at the start for the build-up needs to be fixed, but the one in the middle of the song is good as it gives it a scratchy style :P.

The melody in the middle should change, kinda like the scratch, but something different. It feels a little lifeless but that could be changed with something (dunno what) and it just ends abrubtly, which of course you will fix, but around there you should come in with a silence or something and maybe try some piano work or something with a little build up.

Well thats all for now. Come check out my stuff and tell me what you think.

Deefour responds:

Thanks for that, come back next week/month and you mite see the full version your ideas have helped me alot.. i basicly just got bored of making this and had no ideas on what to put in, i planned on adding a piano just dunno what kind i tried all.. mite go look for some more.

Bu sure ill go and have a look at your music =)

- D4

[Violent Breathing (downto]

nb

Not bad, could be better, I ahevn't hear dthe original or anything but this sounds pretty good for a song off by heart then made with a program. Should make your own though, would be way better.

This also seems repeatitve and is kinda getting on my nerves, make it a little more random next time.

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DarkValentine responds:

well, there realy has'nt been a good version of violent Breathing. And the original was a faster version of it.

The original version of Violent Breathing also was a bit on the repetitive side, and i tried doing it differently before this one.

sadly it did'nt come out like i wanted. i'll try another version soon down the line though.

[-Dedicated To Cassie-]

umm

I dont hear any R and/or B, all I hear is a certain stirng repeating over and over... its very boring. I have no idea what is taking up nearly 4MB, unless you did this on purpose to be very annoying.

Anyway, check for yourself if you don't believe me... and check out my stuff.

[Skeeted Loop]

not bad

Not bad, I like it. Should try a few fades or pans seems you didn't make it a loop other than that, well done.

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[Automation Credibility]

I Like

I like this, its really good, the start is well put together but the ending seems not so good. This seems very fun an upbeat which is what I like, keep up the good work.

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[Damage Control]

Nearly

This is really good, but a few inconsistancys there, it's not very original yet I love it for what it is. I would have put this in video game music cause most of it is in a way. I'm going to download this (I hardly ever download things) because its good for what kind of electronica is.

Keep up the great work, your getting a 5 from me. :P

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pyroguy-37 responds:

Thanks I will keep that in mind for my future uploads! Great review! Always a plus for constructiveness..:P

[-Loop-]

NO

Umm, bad claps, BAD. Add more sounds, use the Playlist/Loop layer and add some more samples from the borswer. Also use the keys, which is in the top right hand corner of the loop maker.

If you understood all that, then do it... right after you check my stuff, and see what you can do with what I just explained to you :P.

[You Know Wat (Original)]

Lay off the rap

if you didn't have most of that rap stuff in there, it would be awesome music. Try puting no voices in there and you might get some more peoples and stuff reviewing your stuff.

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[You Know Wat Remix]

not bad

For your first its good, real good. It sucks that you used the vocies in FL to do the raps, use your own voice or someone elses, or find some Vox's.

Keep up the work.

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