Score: 7

"Do Better"

submission: Techno Paradise

date: November 13, 2006

I reckon you could do better, this seems annoying but well organized which is a plus. I think you should focus on 1 melody and build from that, some parts are good for melodys yet just focus on 1 and interchange from them.

Anyway, swing by my page :P

Score: 7

"Lol"

submission: The Nacho's Kard

date: November 13, 2006

lol, for revesre it sounds just as good, maybe a little annoying and off tune. Keep up the trippy work... Check out my stuff :P

Score: 7

"hmm"

submission: The Nacho's Dark

date: November 13, 2006

Wasn't bad, the start sounded like video game music. Like how you just start to break down in the middle there. Sounds like an Army march or something, I would love to see this in a flash movie.

Keep up the good work... I wonder what it sounds like in reverse :P.

Score: 7

"OK"

submission: High Way (DEMO)

date: November 13, 2006

The start, plain and boring, needs something else. The snare at the start for the build-up needs to be fixed, but the one in the middle of the song is good as it gives it a scratchy style :P.

The melody in the middle should change, kinda like the scratch, but something different. It feels a little lifeless but that could be changed with something (dunno what) and it just ends abrubtly, which of course you will fix, but around there you should come in with a silence or something and maybe try some piano work or something with a little build up.

Well thats all for now. Come check out my stuff and tell me what you think.

Score: 7

"nb"

submission: Violent Breathing (downtone)

date: November 13, 2006

Not bad, could be better, I ahevn't hear dthe original or anything but this sounds pretty good for a song off by heart then made with a program. Should make your own though, would be way better.

This also seems repeatitve and is kinda getting on my nerves, make it a little more random next time.

Check out my stuff.

Score: 0

"umm"

submission: -Dedicated To Cassie-

date: November 13, 2006

I dont hear any R and/or B, all I hear is a certain stirng repeating over and over... its very boring. I have no idea what is taking up nearly 4MB, unless you did this on purpose to be very annoying.

Anyway, check for yourself if you don't believe me... and check out my stuff.

Score: 7

"not bad"

submission: Skeeted Loop

date: November 12, 2006

Not bad, I like it. Should try a few fades or pans seems you didn't make it a loop other than that, well done.

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Score: 8

"I Like"

submission: Automation Credibility

date: November 12, 2006

I like this, its really good, the start is well put together but the ending seems not so good. This seems very fun an upbeat which is what I like, keep up the good work.

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Score: 9

"Nearly"

submission: Damage Control

date: November 12, 2006

This is really good, but a few inconsistancys there, it's not very original yet I love it for what it is. I would have put this in video game music cause most of it is in a way. I'm going to download this (I hardly ever download things) because its good for what kind of electronica is.

Keep up the great work, your getting a 5 from me. :P

Check out my stuff... if you have the time, you'll be busy with this one.

Score: 5

"NO"

submission: -Loop-

date: November 12, 2006

Umm, bad claps, BAD. Add more sounds, use the Playlist/Loop layer and add some more samples from the borswer. Also use the keys, which is in the top right hand corner of the loop maker.

If you understood all that, then do it... right after you check my stuff, and see what you can do with what I just explained to you :P.